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Reviews For: Beginning's End

Toph Gonzalez
2004-12-19
ch 1,
abuseI love the anti-climax! Anyway, why did you use summer when winter is the more apropriate season for death? Summer, in fact, gives vitality except when there's an el niƱo phenomenon.
daphnegray78
2004-11-26
ch 1,
abuseWow. Interesting way of looking at it.

~Daphne~
Manuel Fajar
2004-11-23
ch 1,
abuseThe end holds sprouts of hope for new beginnings in this cycle we call life. m
Oath
2004-11-14
ch 1,
abuse(Sweat of destruction)would be my personal summary of summer. It's so hot i cannot consentrate and i get oh so frustrated because of it. I guess we share the same views on that season. Also, nice poem although maybe you could fit the idea into a haiku?
tablesalt
2004-11-06
ch 1,
abuseYou've taken a new approach to this topic and expressed it well. Short and sweet. Well done.
And by the way, nice username. (:
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