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| Toph Gonzalez 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI love the anti-climax! Anyway, why did you use summer when winter is the more apropriate season for death? Summer, in fact, gives vitality except when there's an el niƱo phenomenon. |
| daphnegray78 2004-11-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. Interesting way of looking at it. ~Daphne~ |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abuseThe end holds sprouts of hope for new beginnings in this cycle we call life. m |
| Oath 2004-11-14 ch 1, | abuse(Sweat of destruction)would be my personal summary of summer. It's so hot i cannot consentrate and i get oh so frustrated because of it. I guess we share the same views on that season. Also, nice poem although maybe you could fit the idea into a haiku? |
| tablesalt 2004-11-06 ch 1, | abuseYou've taken a new approach to this topic and expressed it well. Short and sweet. Well done. And by the way, nice username. (: |