I love the anti-climax! Anyway, why did you use summer when winter is the more apropriate season for death? Summer, in fact, gives vitality except when there's an el niño phenomenon.

Wow. Interesting way of looking at it.

~Daphne~

The end holds sprouts of hope for new beginnings in this cycle we call life. m

(Sweat of destruction)would be my personal summary of summer. It's so hot i cannot consentrate and i get oh so frustrated because of it. I guess we share the same views on that season. Also, nice poem although maybe you could fit the idea into a haiku?

You've taken a new approach to this topic and expressed it well. Short and sweet. Well done.
And by the way, nice username. (: