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| katmonkey 2005-01-18 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. Very true. |
| DOORphrame 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI have seen the effects of alcohol on many members of my family. This stats what happens in so few words. Its great. Keep it up. |
| grim-dreamer 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI'm sure it does, though I've never been there myself (why go when so many have been tricked?) |
| Mime 2004-11-28 ch 1, | abuseNow that's one poem that speaks. |
| Creepy McSteezerson 2004-11-27 ch 1, | abuseShort, simple, to the point, about alcohol. That's all a good poem needs :) |
| pentuprage 2004-11-01 ch 1, | abuseSo true. |