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| Fiara 2004-11-04 ch 1,  | abuseOk, I am going to nicely criticize and compliment. THe whole idea behind the poem is good. I enjoyed it thoroughly. However, you need to make sure that you check your grammar. That's it for now. Once again that was very well written |
| Katterpiller 2004-11-01 ch 1, | abusei am reading your stuff i really like your poems!they are very true and i think everyone can relate to them!i can also see that most of your work it religious and thats cool, WAIT THAT GIVES ME AN IDEA FOR A POEM OF MY OWN! OMG!THANKS! ~kath |