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| a duel of pens 111 2004-11-30 ch 1,  | abuse1 word, MUMMY! nifty. I wonder how many mummys have cool stories like that beinhd them... *thinking about Prince of Persia* |
| tim 2004-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseShort and powerful. You call him your love but then why don't you show more remorse at his death? did you kill him!? did you hire a hitman!? OR! is love like dear, or sweetie, or hunny? actually i think i get it now, but i still think there should be more? is there more!? you could add more and i hope you do so i will read! actually i like most of your poems some of which i'll comment on now. so bye! tim |