Oh no, run Crimson X run! *pant, pant* Alrighty...You have an excellent story on your hands here. It's a very exciting and exhilerating read packed with suspense and mystery and hey, I just found my favorite character...U8! Lol. ^^Update whenever you can! I greatly look forward to reading more. ^-^

You're a brilliant author, did I ever tell you that? Your descriptions are detailed and great and your main character is very cryptic and intriguing. I also really admire how you portray his objectiveness and infamiliarity to his new enivornments and situations. Well done. ^^ And hey, that's kinda cool...I think I'll start calling my sister, "Subject." Hahahahahaha! "Here, Subject..."

I'm back! ^^ Gosh, gotta admit buddy, this story is kinda creepy...BUT BRILLIANT! I've never read a story before that got me thinking quite like this one. You must have done a lot of research on the brain and the level of critical thinking put into it was mind boggling. 0.0 DO we actually control our cognitions and behaviors? And if not, then is there some outside force that influences our brain? Fascinating! I love philosophical stuff and you did a superb (creepy!) job in highlighting interesting psychological issues. Onto the next chapter...

WOW. O *jaw drops open in astounded amazement* Where did you come up with such a fantastic idea? I love this story to bits and pieces, yes I do. The theories and experiments were well thought out, and I applaud your efforts. This was really deep, and the explanations that you've used were simply genius. Also, I can tell that you're well-researched on the human mind. I like the question you pose on whether our brains control us or if we control them. Well, this leads to several theories, but then there isn't enough concrete evidence to determine that answer. However, I truly believe that there isn't any reality in this matter, all of it is ruled by perception. Someone can say that the brain controls us if you're talking about the subconscious level, but you can say we're controlling the brains if we're on the conscientious level. I would have to agree with you on this that the brain probably controls us because of the intricate electrical impulses that it sends to our nerves. Most of the time, most of us aren't conscious of our own actions, and we are considered as functioning on 'auto-pilot'. I have to admit that I function on auto-pilot most of the time, but then, don't we all? Most of the time, most people aren't aware of their own motivations. What a weird structure the brain is, and it's perhaps the most complicated thing in the universe. This is a very good start, extremely well done, and I've enjoyed everything about it. The best thing about it is that it's thought provoking and it is something that most people can learn from. Again, I've enjoyed this piece very much, and I can't wait to see more of this. Crimson X seems like an intriguing character, and the plot seems very interesting too. I've got suspense and shivers all over me now. That's what happens when I see a good story ;) Keep up the very good work, and I'll try to read more of this. See you next chapter! Au revoir, mon ami!

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Sdrive: Very good. It's cool how he doesn't even know what a mirror is and all that stuff. It looks really promising. Just one thing, one of the doctors names was Shinobu, and if you add a Sensuie (or however you spell it) you get the evil dude from Yu Yu Hakoshu (GAH!! SPELLING!) Was that intentional? Or completly coincidental? But as Yuko says, there is no Coincidence in the world, what there is, is Hitsuzen. Well, I guess I'll catch up with you later.Power to the Hikari's

It'ss an intriguing story, very sci-fi (I'm surprised you put this in manga). I wonder what will happen next...
Update soon ^-^
~Sumi-chan
Tickle me Pickle!
Oh, btw, 5' 6" isn't short, I'm 5' ^-^

Hmn, intriguing...
Well, I'm going to keep reading, you've got me interested.
~Sumi-chan
Tickle me Pickle!
Btw, is utterly insipid supposed to be inspired? ^-^