Just need to say: you .This connects a lot with me - second grade memories...ugh...This is such a great song. Speaking of which, 'Purple Inferno' and 'Red Ink' are amazing as well (i'm just saying now because I am in a bit of a rush). You know, it's funny - just as I was reading this I was listening to the My Chemical Romance song, "I'm Not Okay (I Promise)" and I read the line '...It's not okay. It's not okay at all.'

Anyway, gotta go, KEEP WRITING, ciaofa.-Susurrus-P. band are starting to get together now, and one day (once we're actually GOOD) I would be honoured to play a song adaptation of one of your works!_

I hate Mary Sue too, but I loved the poem as:

It has great structureGreat Rhythm (I can't spell)And the use of repetition, brilliant.

Nelly

You know...I read this months ago and I'm just now reviewing it.

Wow, I acted the same way when I was younger too, and now...

"Drown it down, I'm older now. I promise I did not improve. I'm going down, I'm older now. And I blame it all on you. *cough*Rebecca*cough*"