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| Maxegirl1313 2008-02-11 ch 1,  | abusethis was funny update please! i love the way she thinks... |
| koolaidrocks 2005-01-30 ch 3, | abusehey, really cool story, havn't updated yet,but i thinik it's cool, so update soon! |
| Mashiyae 2004-11-02 ch 3, | abuseHi. Wow, that's a nice story. I like it so far. Hm... ideas... well, there's always the bus ride in which something dramatic could happen to the kiddnapper, or to 'you' that makes the whole thing seem more scary to the readers, or maybe you could reveal the kiddnappers identity, maybe as someone she knew, or an old family friend. Tell me what you think. My email's Mattie_May@hotmail.com |