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| Rebekah the Scribe 2005-01-13 ch 9,  | abuseWow...these are quite wonderful! I love them all. ^_^ I do have my favorite, however. And here they are...ahem... VenusMarsSaturn and, Pluto Great job! And so sorry, it has taken me so long to review one of your haikus like you asked... **prostrates self before you in hopes of forgiveness** ~CR |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-08 ch 8, | abuseCerulean spin, Jetstream ripping methane clouds, Uranus's twin. Great Dark Spot mysterious, Shifting from the South to North. —M— |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-08 ch 7, | abuseAquarius's friend, Spinning sideways—gas-giant, Forty-two year Spring. —M— |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-08 ch 6, | abuseMoons or rings—¿Which One? Crowned in fields translucent cold, Tilting in the sky. —M— |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-08 ch 5, | abuseAncient Titan's son, Swelled beyond normality, Swallowing what's near. —M— |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-08 ch 4, | abuseRocky Horror Show, Vampire warrior black laced, Draining with a bite. —M— |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-08 ch 3, | abuseShe can't seem to find, Anyone that will love Her, Poisons all Lovers. —M— |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-08 ch 2, | abuseFlitting messenger, Fluid, silvery and quick, Melting near the sun. —M— |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-08 ch 1, | abuseAverage yellow, From a sister sprung our life, Daily happiness. —M— |
| cosmo-queen 2004-12-08 ch 9, | abuseThese haikus were gorgeous. The images you painted of each planet were unique, and I especially liked the Sun and Mercury. Great work! And thanks for the reviews :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Kalopsia 2004-12-07 ch 9, | abusenice poems. straightforward. tho u have mercury and venus mixed up--venus is the hottest planet and is red. also, what about planet Quaoar? |
| Pimpled Boy 2004-12-01 ch 9, | abuseThis is an excellent anthology of haikus! I like the last haiku about Pluto. I also like the title that you give to this anthology. Thanks for reviewing my work. By the way, what I've typed in that "story" is not kanji, but hiragana. Nice to learn that you know Japanese. Sayonara! |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-11-02 ch 5, | abuseI love this one to, and Jupiter is my favorite planet, no one really evers pays attention of Jupiter so I'm glad that you wrote about it. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more. Much love, Juliet. |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-11-02 ch 4, | abuseThis is my favorite so far. Juliet. |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-11-02 ch 3, | abuseI love how you give Blue, a feeling, that can be difficult in writing, to give colors feeling, but you truly created a mood with this one. Juliet. |