wow... i love it! well written. casn relate. wow...

I enjoyed that so much, the darkness in it was amazing. One of your darker poems I've notice but very very good. Thanks for reviewing!

again so good what more can i say...

This is so sad and so moving!

Beautiful how you seemed to have the random rhymes, and then they fit in somehow. I love your imagery, and it wasn't cliched a bit ). Hard to find original dark poetry on this site, a lot of angsty nothing tends to be here. But this is awesome in that it follows it's own broken pattern of originality ).
chochang913

this is gorgeous.
i luv it.

wow.. very sad and beautifully written

OMG! That was trulyincredible. There was so much emotion, so much truth contained inside this poem. I don't think i ever read anything like it before. You truly are an inspiring writer.
-Sol Ana Iliara

This poem is beautiful, I was holding my breath when I read it. It reminds me of me and some of my friends, how you can never let your realself show, this is a very beautiful poem.
Stuck Forever

Wow you are really talented now read both! Love the prism and seeping from the wrist ideas. Very good!

Wow. That was deep. Your useage of word is great and the writing style is as well. Goodwork. Keep it up.
*CaramelCream*