IT WASN'T SUPPOSED TO END EITHER, RAVEN!! Get back up and let me see what happens! *stabinates you for cliff hanger of DOOM*

Whoo! I love this new chapter, so well written! Although I defintely felt deja vu when I read it. o_O; You sure you've never posted it before??

Anyway, excellent character description, please write more!

WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU UPDATED?!?!? *rawrs and maims you*

Nice chapter, yay for introduction of a new guy!! *applauding* But they be only four, they're so cute! *snuggly of them* Please update more, I wanna read!!

Dude, ** BA kick assness! i can't wait to read more, go Dirk! And boy torture, yes!

Awesome story you have here, but I think you need to explain the wings in a bit more detail at the begining.
-Keep writting! (I'll read C2 later :D )