You show the complexity of the emotions well. ;-; I really enjoy love poems. THey can be ultr-sweet or bittersweet and sad. I love the variety. ^-^ I love yours the best. As their so true ! (Thats why you are on my favs ists.) :P

~ NOelle ~

That is so pretty. It kinda of reminds me of how my koi probably feels. Keep writing.

I can really relate to this one. I do the same thing. I keep things to myself even though I want to say them out loud. But I can't. I put up my own wall and, now, I hope that it's not too strong. Good work. Keep it up.
~*CaramelCream*~

Powerful. I oftend feel the same way as this, you capture the complexity of the feelings very well.
Much love,
Juliet.