|Reviews for Falls|
| hiding behind amber eyes 11/11/04 . chapter 1
wow. were did you come up with this? i like this a lot. i think you took a fairy tale and gave it a drop of reality. lol i really so like it. love your metaphors and details :)
| do not resuscitate 11/9/04 . chapter 1
the fragmented format really worked for this poem. i loved the last four lines, they were just breath-takingly beautiful.
| EvilNeko13 11/2/04 . chapter 1
Very nice. I liked it.
| simpleplan13 11/2/04 . chapter 1
wow... that's beautifully written.. amazing job