 silverquill212 2004-11-11 . chapter 1I can sympathize easily with this. A month ago was my own bittersweet ending, which just happened to be my first real relationship. It was horrible.
I like the way that you use the surroundings to describe the feeling of the event; it's much more effective than trying to say it outright. I particularly like the line "Begging to be melted by your warmth." It's just... unexplainably awesome. It adds color and imagery to your narration.
Thanks for reviewing Generations; I'm glad you like it so well. I thought about it so much that I felt it should be expressed. |