hey,its been a while since i read anything you posted,but i think i read this beforehand. And of course its awesome just like all the other ones you write.u know whats cool,after reading these poems, i feel like wow i know the person who wrote it, How cool is that!! u should post flowers i love that one,i think i told you that before, but ill say it again anyway, i love that one

peaceBaka kitsu

good poem..i liked the flow of it..it sends to me a message of hope for better days...good job

"If Darkness begets dawn
And sunset fades to night
Then dark may beget yet more dark
But so shall light beget more light"
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This poem reminds me of my constant insitance that darkness is an illusion, although it says exactly the opposite. It's really cool. The fact that it is written in rhyme doesn't get in the way of anything, and that's definately a rareity. Some people spend so much time on trying to make the poem rhyme that they seem to forget the original purpose of the poem, but you don't. Good job!
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Much as I like it, though, this poem is maybe just a little depressing...it's like saying that things don't really change, in a way. "Then may dark beget yet more dark..." Maybe I'm just crazy to think this. Who really knows.
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Good poem, anyway.