Hey this is really great! The characters are so cute. What is up with Maika's face you never said?

i like this story! so keep writing please?

I love Mewt! She's so addorable! And the spirit thing killing the king? Wonderful!

I like this one. Hope you continue it if you have the time.

i have reaturned! i like this story. really really like it. when are you going to update AYEW? anywhays good job.

~Okami

Very pretty! I like it! ^_^ (doesn't make much sense, but hey)

Poor San. LOL! He must feel like a piece of luggage getting taken from on point to another. LOL!

Are you stalling? just kidding. update someomore...

Awesome.No words can actually describe this!! It's super!! Update this one soon!! XD I'll b waiting on it!!

Fooey! Need more! I think this is the best I've read yet!

nice story. now you will UPDATE! *daggers out* or else...-don't i just love to threaten the authors of the things i read- *raises daggers* and it will be the end of YOU if you do not update son.

It's been forever since you updated, but I sincerely hope you do soon. I love this story. Hehe, it kinda reminds me of the PS game Jak and Daxter... hehe, don't know why, but that's the world I think of. And is it just me, or does that sound like the modern Earth of their day is our future because of our lack of forsight into our environmental issues? *is odd*

San seems to be coming out of his sheltered shell. It's good to see. What was wrong with Maika's face? I was left wondering. Good chapter!

kyah! hahaha so cute!! especial that part when san woke up from bed!! funny!! good story... update soon k??

oh, i liked this chapter! the descriptions done on the degraded city were very well done...i could definately picture it all in my mind. hope there's an update soon!