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sweetbabii45
2008-08-15
ch 13,
abuseLMFAO she took her clothes...xD
sweetbabii45
2008-08-15
ch 11,
abuseaw thats cute :D
he kept it for 6 years
sweetbabii45
2008-08-15
ch 18,
abuseOMG he kissed her!
his BEST friend...:O
Smileymiley248 XD
2008-08-10
ch 19,
abuseAwsome story are you going to update it soon?
SapphireEyes16
2008-08-10
ch 2,
abuseplease update soon!
2SweetSunshine
2008-08-02
ch 19, anon.
abuseI found your story by looking at the favorites of another author. I read your entire story as fast as I could, and I absolutely loved it! I think you have a really nice storyline, and I love the Chloe/Warren/Connor love triangle.
But don't worry, I'm not reviewing to beg you for an update. I just read your profile, and I'm really, really sorry to hear about your mom. I'm not just saying that, I really am. My family thought earlier this year that my mom had cancer, and that was quite a scary experience. I can't imagine my mom not being here. It turned out that she didn't have cancer, but I just wanted to convey that I know what its like to find out someone you love might have cancer. I know it's much, much harder for you, since your mom does have cancer, but I just wanted to give you my sympathy.
I just wanted to tell you I love your story, and I eagerly look for an update, but I completely understand why you haven't updated.
Love in Christ,
2SweetSunshine
ColdDesire
2008-07-18
ch 19,
abuseHey. Just wanted to write a review. I was kind of shocked too that Warren was so open about his emotions after vehemently denying his "liking" for her and thinking it was disgusting. I suppose that is hormones and testosterones kicking in. But yeah, the story is very amusing. I kind of hope that Warren will get over Chloe though, I feel it would be really odd for them to be together their whole life.

There were some minor errors, spelling, skipping a few words, and punctuation, but that's all right. I'm sure that you were in a rush. Update soon! =]
MCakaWriterGirl
2008-06-30
ch 19,
abuseI really like your idea and plot. hope you review soon. do you know who she is going to end up with already.
BurntSky
2008-06-30
ch 19,
abusePLEASE!! UPDATE!! I BEG OF YOU!! awesome story by the way ^^ claire is so sweett~~ THANKS SO MUCH!
pheonixorion10
2008-06-17
ch 19,
abuseok i know its been like two years since you have updated this but please try and update soon because i really wanna know what happens
xiia0moonlight
2008-06-17
ch 1,
abuseyeahh, the story is great. but the last time you updated was ard 2 years ago. did you gave up this storyy? it's a pity, but i think you you must have your reasons. i dun wna sound like a brainless ** that only complained when you did not update. so, good luck? (:
darkgurl92
2008-06-15
ch 19,
abuseNEW READER...cant wait for the next update..
waiting for a chloe and Coonor kissing moment..
hopefully..there's one...or more..
alexis grey
2008-06-05
ch 19,
abuseWhat a wonderful story, a very entertaining read. I love all of your characters, especially the characterization of Claire. Well, actually, just all of the characterizations. This story caught my attention and held it. Well done!

I read your bio, and although we have never met and likely never will, know that I'm hoping everything works out for the best, and that in this difficult time you will be in my prayers. Sorry if that sounds weird or anything but... I really mean it.
All the best,

Alexis
alexis grey
2008-06-05
ch 2,
abuseA very entertaining read!
CreativeArt
2008-06-02
ch 19, anon.
abuseOk, so here's the thing.

1) I love this story
2) I love this story and it's only been...TWO YEARS since the last update.
3) I love conner/chloe the most, despite my love for the best friend thing, but i'm unsure of which path the story will take so i'm on my toes here.
4) ^i'm on my toes about this and you haven't update in TWO YEARS.

hun i know life can take interest away from writing easily, and time can become less a luxury, but keep in mind the joy that made you start. and look at your review count-- you've broken a thousand. who can't take excessive ammounts of pride in that, honestly? your audience is obviously very large, so should you ever find the passion you once had for this story, you'd be making 1508 (now 1509) people very happy. how many people can say that have that power?
keep writing, i hope it takes you somewhere someday.
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