hahass dont worry larh! it was a very nice poem. so obviously you can do both genders.

great job yeah. keep it up. what does the latin line mean anyway?

rei.

ARGH.I LOVE IT.PIGSIE WHERE DO YOU GETYOUR WONDERFUL BRAIN.amazing amazing.simply amazing.i loved it with all my heart.-kismet.

This is a wonderful poem. The words are well-selected and they convey the message with a great impact. Kudos! Please review my work too.

beautiful descriptions. i loved the ending. well-written and meaningful. i love it.

Wow. A really great poem! I think you're one of the best poets I've ever met. Anyway, on to the good points. I really love that part about "She has forgiven the past. The past has not forgiven her." That was a master touch! The comparison is well brought out. Not really sure what you meant by "Her name is not Havisham" though. Nevertheless, keep up the good work!

Wow. Really powerful. I loved it, definatly a fav.