I love how you gave the shell pieces texture at the end. It was such a subtle touch, but it added nicely to the mood.

This one definitely touches base. The remarkable thing is its ability to do so through simplicity. God, it seems I can't even write so simply in a review, yet you laid out the feelings easily and swiftly. That takes talent.

beautifully written! Very deep. I liked it ^.^ keep up the hard work!