this is so outrageous, ridiculous and overly dramatic. and, in this way, it PERFECTLY describes a good crush.

i can definitely feel for you. for me, there's no such thing as a 'little crush' for me, it's infatuation. for the last 4 years, everything about him makes me twitch. alas, he is one of my friends, and i would rather die than ruin oiur friendship, so, long story short, i am screwed.

Ugh, been there, done that, not looking forward to going back. But you described it well. I remember those feelings from when I was younger... oh, crap, I sound OLD. When I say younger, that's, like, a year ago. Evan... my one and only "true love"... or so I thought. When you fall in love... that's when crushes become fond memories. Until then, they just suck. Anyway, I think I've bored you with my rambling long enough. Good poem, keep up the great work!

I love the last line of this poem 'but hell I'm so in love with you.'

"Your anything's my everythingYour world is my desireI know I hardly know youThat's what drives me higher." I .love that bit. Well written too. nicely done.

Haha. We've all been there. Very good use of words. The first lines are very powerful. Last lines... so true. Ho ho.

Ah, the person you love to hate. It's a great thing to have a crush. Great poem.

VERY GREAT POEM! I feel the same way too _ Keep writing!