Hi! About time i came back a reviewed huh? Sorry it's taken me a year or whatever to do so.

Anyways! I like it (had to go back and reread stuff so i wasnt confused) and i've just noticed i leave pretty lame comments...oh well. hehe.

Artemis has got to be one of the coolest characters... I like villians... they're always so much awesomer than all the others. Well, hope you dont plan on leaving the story like this. I know how ya feel about updating...check out my story i went MIA for like a year before adding a chapter.

Well since i left you a comment you owe me a new chapter soon!

Yo. It's been some time.

I like the wide variant in mythical creatures you've got going in this story. It gives the feeling that the world you've created is really... I dunno. Big. (Wow, look at me, the literate one).

Artemis is a cool character. Interesting that someone should take their penname from such an apparent evil bugger... Maybe I should start calling myself Barty.

Hope to have a more recent update, and I mean that for the two of us. ;)

Hey, remember me? Yeah, it's been awhile since I've reviewed for you--things stay busy. Anyways, as promised, here's another review for you.

I like the detailed back story you're providing as far as Griffin goes--the bit about why dragons and unicorns don't get along. It shows that you're thinking ahead and such, which is wise. I sort of though Anrisa overreacted a bit to Ty's comments there at the end of the chapter, but otherwise, I liked it. I will try to do better about sending you reviews ok? I know I suck at sending you timely reviews--I'll do my best though!

camlann :)

Very cool. Has a great story line...

awesome work but watch your descriptions. what you see might not be what the reader sees.

much respect

nach

O_o ...

So all of a sudden she meets a random Varnez...?

And he starts talking about...a war..?

I hope Anrisa gets reunited with Ty again soon. Because I am getting righteously confused.

Either way, my apologies for not reviewing. I'll continue to attempt more timely reviews in the near future.

Ok, so I finally got around to reviewing again--I read two chapters tonight. Anyways, I really liked when Anrisa slapped that captain across the face--it made me grin. Ty sort of reminds me of Tristan, the way he remained silent through the fight with the captain. I really enjoyed that chapter. Anyways, I'll try not to go so long between reading your chapters.

camlann :)

Good chap, the descriptions you gave were nicely worded. Keep updating!

cool... i am very interested in this story... when i get more time i shall read more... thatnks!!

Nachoes

Did I mention that I really like the title for this story? It's very awesome! So, are the two dragons a couple, or what? Will there be baby dragons in their future? LOL. Anyways, the only thing is that you're still moving incredibly quick on a lot of the action here. I think the story would be even better if you could slow it down--it increases the tension and foreshadowing. Anyways, I'll try to read a few chapters each day, so that you'll get reviews, and I won't get review-writing burnout from doing it all in one day. Hah!

camlann :)

Well, you've got an interesting story here, but I think you're relying heavily on description rather than action at the start of the story. Everything happens incredibly quickly, without a lot of time to digest it--it's like information overload almost. But I really like your idea here! Anyways, I'm going to read the next chapter, now, ok?

camlann :)

It's a good chapter, but I have to say i think you shouldn't split it into two stories. Your average novel length is 80 0 words, and from what I can see there's no reason why you shouldn't continue with it as it is.

Thanks for continuing to review Deoman!

that jerk! what the _ does he think he's doing!? D:< gahh! i am so cheesed off right now! stupid frickin dragon! he'll ruin everything! *grummble grummble*

i don't think there are to many princes. it makes sense that they be there. there's bound to be a lot of princes with that many races, right?

^^ i think Pheonix is my new fave

I like Endowyn! he complicated and idk but I like him. he's definately my fave!