this was a very good story! i think it would be a bit better if you beefed it out more, with dialogue and such, because you just sort of tell us the whole story instead of showing it to us. i recomend filling in a summery as well perhaps something like how its sort of like and Inuit tale about a demon wolf and how he came to rule or something. also advertise it as a one shot (as I assume thats wut it is) good work!

this good, maybe a little more dialogue, but i like it

Hey! I really liked this story. It has some grammatical errors, but it's no big deal, just a few commas missing and words in the wrong tenses. I like how it is mysterious- you don't know for sure why Shadowfang is different than other wolves or where Arrow and Silver came from. I just have one question, is this a one-shot or will it become a full story?

ps. thanks so much for the reviews!

pps. I got to watch Van Helsing- Finally!