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| ThisCut-UpAngel 2005-07-30 ch 1,  | abuseI *love* Mars. And this poem definitly does it justice. . .well written emotion without being too sappy. |
| giggles for boys 2004-12-07 ch 1, | abuse^^ |
| Unperfect Guy 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abusegod flow. nice rhyming scheme - it never sounded corny, like many rhyming poems do. Very beautifully illustrated. |
| M. R. Smale 2004-11-26 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written, the rhyme scheme is excelent, the structure and flow are just the same, I'd give it a perfect 10. Keep writing! |
| Sohari Kare 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abusenice!! the ryhmes and the flow of the sonnet are good... tis wistful |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abuseWondrous alignments in sky's ecliptic surely this melody will bring forth. m |
| graffiti-skies 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abusebeautiful! love the end...love the way it flows |
| Rhyet The Dark Angel 2004-11-22 ch 1, | abusenice...very nice. I absolutely loved it. ps=thanks for the reveiw. |
| starbursts and YourLove 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseI love how it flows..hmm reminds me of the manga series mars lol, anyway nice sonnet! =] |
| a muse's inspiration 2004-11-18 ch 1, | abuseWow... Maybe I should try my hand at sonnets. I've only ever written one, & that was for a Romeo & Juliet project at high school. Well done though, 'tis lovely work! ~*inspiration*~ |
| Cyssel 2004-11-16 ch 1, | abusei don't often read sonnets but this one's really good. the way you've put things and everything. keep it up ^^ |
| Moon-Chaser 2004-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI've never seen the show 'Mars' but I love the poem! I think its great. Keep it up. |
| negligible fictional force 2004-11-15 ch 1, | abusemars! it's been made into a tv series staring vic zhou and barbie hsu, and i'm a fan, but anyway, i love the words you use to describe their soulmate-ness, and the way it rhymes and flows. lovely work. -kismet. |
| Gothic Spook 2004-11-11 ch 1, | abuseWow! I LOVE IT! THats so beyond brilliant! I'm so amazed! I wish I could write a good as you! Really wel done on this! I'm off to read and review more of your stuff now! Ps: Thankies for the review *huggles* |
| Calure 2004-11-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, I like this it is quite impressive. Hopefully I can read through all your stuff. From just one it seems that you are quite the talented writer in many aspects. Well, I will let you go for now. |