I *love* Mars. And this poem definitly does it justice. . .well written emotion without being too sappy.

^^

god flow. nice rhyming scheme - it never sounded corny, like many rhyming poems do. Very beautifully illustrated.

Beautifully written, the rhyme scheme is excelent, the structure and flow are just the same, I'd give it a perfect 10. Keep writing!

nice!! the ryhmes and the flow of the sonnet are good... tis wistful

Wondrous alignments in sky's ecliptic surely this melody will bring forth. m

beautiful! love the end...love the way it flows

nice...very nice. I absolutely loved it. ps=thanks for the reveiw.

I love how it flows..hmm reminds me of the manga series mars lol, anyway nice sonnet! =]

Wow...
Maybe I should try my hand at sonnets.
I've only ever written one, & that was for a Romeo & Juliet project at high school.
Well done though, 'tis lovely work!

~*inspiration*~

i don't often read sonnets but this one's really good. the way you've put things and everything. keep it up ^^

I've never seen the show 'Mars' but I love the poem! I think its great.
Keep it up.

mars! it's been made into
a tv series staring vic zhou and
barbie hsu, and i'm a fan,
but anyway, i love the words
you use to describe their
soulmate-ness, and the way
it rhymes and flows.
lovely work.
-kismet.

Wow! I LOVE IT! THats so beyond brilliant! I'm so amazed! I wish I could write a good as you! Really wel done on this!
I'm off to read and review more of your stuff now!
Ps: Thankies for the review *huggles*

Wow, I like this it is quite impressive. Hopefully I can read through all your stuff. From just one it seems that you are quite the talented writer in many aspects. Well, I will let you go for now.