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| Noelle Vanessa Dor 2005-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseThis is quite one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, although I read it aloud and knew that its beauty would shine through so much more if spoken than if simply read. Sometimes, a poem is just better that way... but as I said, simply beautiful. I love the extended metaphor between you and the not so-beautiful flower. If my interpretation is correct, you see that there are so many beautiful women in the world and you're striving to understand why this significant other you're talking about chose you out of all of them. As well, I love the Nature theme. Excellent piece. The emotion really comes through. |
| Burning Moon 2004-11-03 ch 1, | abusewow . . . i love the metaphors here: " . . . I am but a dandelion rooted in this exquisite this disgusting this lovely wasteland this graveyard this foul paradise where pseudo-love flourishes between the stems among the leaves and then evaporates come morning" |