WOW I love this poem. It's beautifully written and soo true. Gorgeous descriptions.

I would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot.

This is quite one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, although I read it aloud and knew that its beauty would shine through so much more if spoken than if simply read. Sometimes, a poem is just better that way... but as I said, simply beautiful. I love the extended metaphor between you and the not so-beautiful flower. If my interpretation is correct, you see that there are so many beautiful women in the world and you're striving to understand why this significant other you're talking about chose you out of all of them. As well, I love the Nature theme. Excellent piece. The emotion really comes through.

wow . . . i love the metaphors here:
" . . . I am but a dandelion
rooted in this exquisite
this disgusting
this lovely wasteland
this graveyard
this foul paradise
where pseudo-love flourishes
between the stems
among the leaves
and then evaporates
come morning"