whoa...i really really like this...and sometimes when i read the sogns in the song subcategory of the poetry section i dont get the feeling that its really a song, and thats its more of a regular poem, but the author just came up with a tune it or something...but not this...this is just so...undescribably songlike...i love it.

LlaMa

I loved it. Short is not bad. Loved it and your last one. I want to eat it. therefore, one day..I shall.

very spiffy... i like the "morning's clashing waves/the silent horror that they gave" part.