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| Saeger 2004-11-25 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful, expressive, well put. Very touching, to me at least. Good poem. I may not review all of your stuff (time can be rushed at my house...) But I'll try to read it all. You're very good- i hope you keep writing. |
| Dystorque 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem, full of raw emotion and unadulterated thought. I especially love the end, where you incorporate a powerful metaphor in your imagery. "Making me talk about hings" - things |
| goole 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abuseTo be lost... I know what its like... Sorry for not reviewing all your work a bit ago. I've been a bit caught up with my GCSE's. But like i say about all your pieces; bloody brilliant... but in another form of text. |