You sound really serious! never seen you like that. It is nice very cool lol. ill promise to give u an autographed cd! hahaha

Signed: D JOE (your #1 fan lol)

the soldier is mua. yes that was me. I love u, how did u know I suffered like that. I lose the chocolates you gave me in the trench. did I shout jump? I did not want death to embrace me, for I am sensitive

peace,br8kin_d_habit

OH MY GOSH! I LOVE THIS! FANTASTIC! i can never write something like this in 100 years. anyway, for "whizzed pass me", isn't it supposed to be 'whizzed past me'?
anyway, this is really nice. great job.

STATIC! we... anyway...you know what'll make this peom better? Rhymes. It'll sound so much better. arg i've heard this in class before...infact, i heard it today...>>'