This is great...while most people feel that repetition is a bad way to go in the poem I find that it enforces the idea here. You also have a few strong metephors in here such as "the mirror casts a blurry reflection." this is a great peice.

This is totally relative to my life. It's a greatweb of words. I thouroughly enjoyed...it makes you think

Wow get story poem I wish i could write that well but I guess i can't because no one is reviewers my...opps I'm ramberling sorry great poem I loved it