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| Simple Life 2004-11-07 ch 1,   | Hi, this is quite a cute poem. |
| Ohmm 2004-11-06 ch 1, | Nice expolation on the appearences of green in today's society. However, you might try cutting down on exclamation marks. Too much emphatic speech is painful - only use it when you feel the particular phrase is truly deserving of emphasis. |