   fallin4ualwayz 2006-08-05 . chapter 1beautiful! |
 JC-Saved-Me 2005-01-17 . chapter 1Aww i felt this way too :'( but I am happy now with a new guy, a new experience but I know there will always be a place in my heart 4 the guy that got away...*~Rachel~* |
 FrostedTeardrop 2004-11-18 . chapter 1This was a truly beautiful poem. It touched me deeply. I really like the last stanza. Excellent work. |
 A Chroi 2004-11-10 . chapter 1Aww...*cries* That was beautiful. I love the tone of it, and your word choices were excellent. Wonderful poem. |
 Summerkins 2004-11-05 . chapter 1Nice poem Carrie. You need to write more. |
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