Awesome poem, Carrie...

I can't think of anything in this I don't like. The word-choice, the structure, the hidden meanings behind every line... beautiful. As usual. ;)

As for C.C. -- there's really nothing much I think you should change... Perhaps a bit about punctuation.

Especially this 'And we finally sealed our love, with a kiss, that night.' because I'm not sure if it's really correct. Of course, you're free to ignore me.

Now, I'm off (have to run).

See you later!

-Rachel.

Another "Aww...*cries*" poem. It's beautiful. I'm glad that you're able to write happier things now. Kudos.