please update! lol. please??

She's ridiculous in this chapter. Blowing up about Jesse getting jealous? I would have found it quite cute. She's all 'omg i'm SO into Jesse' he says ONE thing out of turn and suddenly she's all ice-queen and 'omg Luke, you know french, you're cute and you're stalking me, let's have some Thai" completely dumping Jesse? Way stupid man, WAY stupid.

Slight continuity error in chapter 5 too: She says that her mom isn't her birth mom...so how come Jesse noticed their similarities in appearance as mother and daughter?

Other than that, this is an awesome fic, I really do like it, wish you would continue - maybe review it a little, make the characters more...rounded/real. No that sounds harsh. They ARE pretty good. hm. Just look over it 'kay?

Happy writing!

ooh, that's harsh!
This is such a great story...
Please update!

This story is really cool and just getting exciting! Though, I think Eve overreacted in this last one...anyways I really can't wait for the next chapter!

You are the meanest person on this site. How DARE you not finish this and leave us hanging? I've been laughing hysterically since i started it, but I'm about to cry seeing how you have updated it in 2005. Please please if you have any compasion for my poor depressed self, finish the story. I'll send you a bouquet of sunflowers!
Thank you,
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hey! i love this story! and jesse bonds! i really like your characterisation(:

just out of curousity, why don't you like the name yvonne?

LOL love it!

omg lady how cruel are you to leave this wonderful story hanging like this? you have such a way with words - i love the dialogues and how you convey the character's thoughts. but please continue this gem of a story!

Ouch...that must have hurt Jesse!
Great story, at first I thought it would be one giant cliché, you know, normal but charasmatic and pretty girl suddenly has the attention of the guy everyone wants but her. But this is kind of different, and I really like it. Well done!
Smiles,
Danielle=)

poor jess
are you ever going to update this?
cause its pretty amazing

oh my
you should update this story
cause it is just a joy to read

so yeah if you have time it'd be pretty cool if you could update =]

OMG how hillarius! I just laughed my ** of at this: Jesse Bonds is... blushing? Oh, no. No. Please, God, just this once, NO!
Haha! so funny ^^

Please write more?!

just found this story - its really good!! update soon please!!

WOW i love it! u hav 2 finish it n she shud end up with jesse!