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| amaryllisfaye 2008-07-08 ch 6, | abuseomg lady how cruel are you to leave this wonderful story hanging like this? you have such a way with words - i love the dialogues and how you convey the character's thoughts. but please continue this gem of a story! |
| IdeasInTheAir 2008-07-04 ch 6, | abuseOuch...that must have hurt Jesse! Great story, at first I thought it would be one giant cliché, you know, normal but charasmatic and pretty girl suddenly has the attention of the guy everyone wants but her. But this is kind of different, and I really like it. Well done! Smiles, Danielle=) |
| hapax xenier 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abusepoor jess are you ever going to update this? cause its pretty amazing |
| Lyrical.Love 2008-04-20 ch 6, | abuseoh my you should update this story cause it is just a joy to read so yeah if you have time it'd be pretty cool if you could update =] |
| BluePillow75 2008-03-20 ch 2, | abuseOMG how hillarius! I just laughed my ** of at this: Jesse Bonds is... blushing? Oh, no. No. Please, God, just this once, NO! Haha! so funny ^^ |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-03-17 ch 6, | abusePlease write more?! |
| noodless 2008-03-07 ch 6, | abusejust found this story - its really good!! update soon please!! |
| funky-gg 2008-02-24 ch 6, | abuseWOW i love it! u hav 2 finish it n she shud end up with jesse! |
| Efreisone 2008-01-27 ch 6, | abuseWHAT. NO. No, Jesse, no! Seriously, it's been like, what, two years since your last update? How can you leave this hanging here? I'm dying. Dying, I tell you. |
| Efreisone 2008-01-26 ch 5, | abuseTotal 'daww...' moment right there... Jesse is so sweet. This is by far my favorite story on fictionpress! You must update more often! |
| flights.of.fantasy 2007-12-25 ch 6, | abusebeautiful story with a realistic and funny heroine. i love her, at least she's well rounded and she's.. real? i dont know what words i can possibly use to describe her. hope this story isnt dead, its really interesting, do update soon? lovee. |
| Bellaria 2007-11-30 ch 6, | abusei like this i hope you update one day its a good story :D:D |
| Jestry 2007-11-26 ch 6, | abuse"Not a band geek, not a freak geek, which are all, you know, completely cool things to be, cooler than being cool, actually." Band geek ftw. |
| Jestry 2007-11-26 ch 5, | abuseAw. *puddle melt* |
| Jestry 2007-11-26 ch 4, | abuseO.o Poor Jesse. Dude, everytime I read "Jesse Bond" I think James Bond. Okay anyway... Jesse > Clay. :] |