his distracted thoughts are so cute and adorable. make this longer! please... i kinda felt short with this one

I always did love that song :)

It depicts so much the cimplicity there is in love that people fail to realize.

Short + Sweet = PERFECT :D

I've read this story multiple times, but I'm always so envious of the girl in it. It's such a wonderful picture of what love could be and I think you did a beautiful job capturing. Love the ending and love the song reference!

aw
thumbs up!
five stars
xx

thats so sweet and adorable and just, perfect :]
I wish there was a whole story like that so I could sit her all night and go "aw" lol

Short, but sweet :)

Made me smile :D! Props :D

beautiful story :-)

Sweet. Adorable. Cute. Lovable. And so many other synonyms. This made me smile.

aw I think I just melted a little bit (just a bit)...

Cute. Sharing the remote control is an important part of life. ^^

aww this fic is so cute
hehe hes just so in love with her freckle xD
such a sweet fic overall

...a different kind of one-shot, but beautiful all the same

Aw, very cute. :]

It's not often that I see one-shot's like this one, especially in a guy's point of view and I loved it.
The way he kept coming back to the freckles and the dimple, it was just sweet.
I always laughed when the 'focus' part came, you did an amazing work.