Reviews for Awkward World - FictionPress.com

Moon-Chaser 2004-12-22 ch 1,	Opening line really draws people in. I love it, really great poem. keep it up.
protagonist 2004-12-05 ch 1,	heyy. i really like your style of writing. and it shows in this poem, more than any other. only thing is, this one sounds a bit chliche to me. like something close to a depressed angel with broken wings. one or two of this kind is alright, as long as it doesn't become a habit. hey, jus giving you some tips and suggestions. no offence meant, and it's really up to you to follow. so yah, you're a great author, and you can probably make poetry writing more than just a hobby if you treat it that way. :)
Covered-Flame 2004-11-05 ch 1,	Nice. Somehow original although the idea's been done so many times before. Good one, it's going to my favorites.
Sublime Rhapsody 2004-11-05 ch 1,	Very creative and the first line is a real eye catcher. Wonderful job again!