Eh...the plot seems good, but your depiction of Set isn't. Obviously you're referring to the Egyptian god, but your depiction is very wrong. I know, I know, it's your story, but I just want to point this out. Set didn't have black eyes and black hair, he had red eyes and hair. And he wasn't a jackal, he was an unidentified animal that could've possibly been a jackal, but was often seen as an aardvark or donkey, Typhonic beast or 'Set' animal.

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m yummy story. =3 :eats Set for dinner: X3

I loved this story, kinda like the Adams Family but not quite, more fantastical. Wondrous story, I'll certainly read the sequel later.

AH! Are you writting more? I really like it. But you left it at a cliff hanger. Htose are bad. Very bad. I really like it. Nice job. Please wrtie soon.

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My god woman! How many endings is this sucker gonna have? Although, I have to say that I am vastly interested.

MY gosh! What a sick story! I must admit I was kinda disgusted but ti was actually pretty good. The beginning kinda threw me off but it got better. U did good.

Ok, seriously now. If you want to know what happened to Cyreina the 3rd, her story is up and titles LOVELY. Yes, Biest and Khnumn have stoires. Khnumns is up also, called If you were to stalk a Goddess and Im working on Biest's. As for Sokanone, she shall be joining my beloved pyschos soon, so no worries SlimKitty ^ ^

Hm... I don't know, the sick and twisted ending didn't seem very sick and twisted. Then again, I am morally bankrupt and desensitized to most kinds of violence. Maybe it just didn't hit me as hard as it hit others. Anyway, I liked the original tragic ending the best.

Like I said before, you must do more stories with these characters. I want to know what happened to Sokanone and Cyreina the 3rd. Do Biest and Khnumm have stories? Don't you dare say you're done! These characters are too damn entertaining.