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| Ruthy 2005-03-21 ch 1,   | wow...youir really good at making the reader feel a certain way...verry nicely expressed. |
| Devil's Footprint 2005-02-28 ch 1, | This poem describes exactly how I feel about a certain girl. Great poem - it effectively shows the force of your emotions for this girl. |
| breezy nostrils 2004-12-05 ch 1, | Aw...that was touching...sad, but really sappy...this girl must mean a lot to you... |
| EmeraldEyes89 2004-11-10 ch 1, | AWW!! I love the poem! Sorry I havent been able to read them lately My comp has bene odd |
| Jeri 2004-11-09 ch 1, | This poem seems different from your others. I like the unique style. |
| LegendaryPunk29 2004-11-05 ch 1, | Interesting, because I can deffinitely understand and relate to what you are saying here. great piece of work, but try to work on the structure of the poem. Like breaking up to stanzas or something you know? great work though, keep writing |