^^ Hi, just returning the favor. You know how to tell a good story that keeps the reader wanting more, lol. I especially like the prologue the most for some strange reason, xD good use of words that made me curious a bit. Thanks for the suggestion too, ^^ continue the great work!

SO good, update soon. PLEASE! I AM BEGGING YOU I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

sumi-cahn, this is BREATH TAKING. how can you hide out on so much talent? your word use is just vivid and conveys both thoughts, and expresses emotions brilliantly. battle scenes are depicted with a keen eye and the humor is just so much like a manga. a GREAT read as always sumi-chan, I feel bad for my lack of reviews. ToT your deserve so much better, greater praise then I can offer.

in short: never stop writing because you are BRILLIANT.

~* noelle

ano... i hope hes okay! merle wouldnt kill him.. rite?.. RITE?... ano.. Great chapter, please do continue!

I feel so bad, I haven't read the prologue and reviewed it. I really suck, don't I? alright, seriously:

this is by far some of the best writing I've come across upon the site. nekoi seems very ... twisted. I find it very intriguing, almost seductive in the way you have described her in such a short chapter. taka seems like a very interesting character, I hope he can grow more as a character along with nekoi. a very interesting and unique concept, as most of your works are.

~* noelle

this is realy good. I like it a lot. More chapters please. :)

Wow, this is really cool. I didn't really know what to expect from this to tell you the truth. Not only that but I rarely read original novels on this site. Most of them I don't think are that great. But this is awesome! I was really pulled into this story from the very start. Really nice.

YO... This is a good story. I wish to hear more of it. It is ver suspenceful and I hope the next one was as good as the other 4. This story is going under my favorite stories list. ;)

no need to be upset. updates are well apreciated no matter how late they are, can't rush perfection on anyway. ^__^ personally, I really enjoyed this. amazing prose and just really enlightening. I love the poem above, really just an amazing touch. so far a very unique and well written read, I can't wait to see what happens next!

!~* noelle *~!

awsome chappy!! please continue!

omg I luv it

Don't worry, I'm sure you'll do fine on Taka's view. This is an interesting story, and I shall continue reading whenever you update.

Kudos!

-PTG

I can see why Taka's hard...

Wow, this is an amazing bit that I've read so far. So short, yet it makes the reader yearn for more of this wonderful story. Your summary has intrigued me, and I think that it was a very interesting plotline that you've come up with. A student that didn't get a 4.0, yet is still accepted into the schoo. I think that's an awesome twist the storyline, and the characters Nekoi and Taka are interesting as well. This prologue was beautifully written, and you've described Nekoi and Taka's personalities effectively. Once again, you've made interesting characters, and I can feel adrenaline in my veins again. I know that you're a writer that has a talent for writing good action stories, and I know that I'm not going to be disappointed. I'm excited to read more of this story, and I shall read onto the next chapter. Keep up the exceedingly good work, and I think that this was a wonderful piece of inspiration. As always, keep up the wonderful, wonderful work, and as a writer, I offer you my applause. This has simply stunned all the eloquence I have, and no words can come to mind when I think of this piece except for the word fantastic. I'm stunned speechless by the sheer amount of talent displayed here. Wow, you've got too many good works. Pretty soon, I'm going to run out of compliments for you! Haha, just kidding, God forbid that will ever happen! Don't worry, I'll always have something good to say, because I'm extremely creative that way ^_~ Anyways, keep up the excellent work, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of this. Au revoir, mon amie!

chibichocobo

luv it :)