I relate to this so well, beautifully written without a doubt.

Wow, another poem I can't believe you wrote while in high school. I like all your references to almost a medieval time (the castles, commoners...I don't know if that's what you were going for, but yeah). Cool stuff.

ow, beautiful. but I don't think I completely understood what you meant. what's the part of friendship that you have to pay for? in my opinion it's only rewarding, unless of course you only befriend someone to be popular. but perhaps I'm just to stupid to see... so, never mind me.
-x- DameNoire

I liked the rhyme! short and sweet! Keep it up!