I think my brother is hopelessly in love with you, he can never resist a good author

hey, i read this story a few days ago, didn't review it, but now i'm bored and thinking about how i wanna go to australia, so i'm feeling like i could say how i liked it! since i read brokensomething before, it felt like a...does "youth work" exist in english?... well, very refreshing and agreeable to read, very addictive too. i loved the main characters and how they are evolving through the story.
i also began the future war story (sorry, i can't remember titles in general, it's not against you!) and it was good but i think i need to slow down in fictionpress stuff and read like "real books" for a while, but i swear, i'll return to you!

Love how you introduce this in your beginning paragraph!

Wow... I really enjoyed this apart from the lack of warnings or markers when scenes change and i'm so happy they got a happy ending.

I do believe you've made a review-whore out of me. AMAZING! Gold star for you. I didn't even mean to read this again. I was supposed to be doing research for my English assignment. I went to type in google url and ended up on your profile page. HOW ODD! And then I was like "Meh, whilst I'm here..."

I like ALL the characters in this story. Jamie is smexyful. In a 'I'm too cool for everyone but Brian' kind of way. Brian is awesomly fantastic in an...awesomely fantastic way? And...I actually really liked Koda. Right up until the caveman act about sex. He broke my heart...kidding. But yeah, I really liked this story. Although, I ACTUALLY noticed spelling mistakes! Mostly because I was just reading along and then suddenly the sentence would stop or something and I'd be like "...hang on, where's the rest of the sentence?"

I rather like horses. So Bree is the shizz. Except I was fucking terrified my first time on a horse. In my defense, my first time on a horse (you know, outside of pony rides at the ekka) was in Malaysia and the instructor dude didn't speak english so good and decided that I was a natural and took the...lead rope thingy off after I'd only been on for a few minutes and was like "Let's go up the beach now!" and started trotting up and my horse followed and I was like "FUCCK!" And Brian did much better than me. I needed a boosty thing to get up on the horse...although I didn't stack it when I got off.

Oh, I also never understood the Danny relationship thing. That never really got explained. Jamie just hated him and it didn't really make sense...well, it did because sometimes ppl just hate their siblings but usually there's a reason for that and...one wasn't ever really given so I was kinda like "Huh?"

You can also tell you wrote this when you were younger. Aside from, you know...the author notes mentioning school and stuff...because you're writing style is a bit different. Anywho! I reviewed again! YAY ME! Take care and all that jazz. Update something soon!! Even if it's just a random one shot. I'll read all your stuff. Keep it awesome, Awesome. Hehe, always wanted to say that...till the next review! If there's another one, anyway...

I do think your rushing abit but it still is a great story so far... you are quite good I must admit

Boy,if you don't take care, you will definitely became one of my favourites writters (and I'm not meaning fictionpress,'cause in there you already are, but outside fictionpress, like, competing with the published author).
Geez,I was losing my hope that Brian would finally acknowledge that he wasn't totally innocent! But in the last minute he did XD. I know, I know, he had his reasons,but still!
I kinda pitied Koda (every time I read his name the imagem of a bear jump into my head!Every.Single.Time! I blame Disney's "Brother Bear"), he's just a poor and confused boy with no one to turn to... Yes, he was stupid, and idiot, and his last thing with Jamie... outch! Nhé, he was just a kid who needs the right help XD
Bjs
Elyon

I actually liked it. I found myself annoyed at Brian every once in a while, but I can understand his character. Jamie did piss me off in the beginning, but I grew fond of by the time the story was finished. Koda's character was intriging. With him you went the oposite way as Brian. Brian took his love and tried to do something positive, got hurt, and then worked it out. Koda hid his, got mad, and then hurt the person he supposedly cared for. The story was good, if a teensy bit sopa opera-ish. It was still a good read though.


AGTMA

Aw ... That end scene was really cute :D. Love the way this storys going.

well that was fast

It's always nice when they work things out in the end.

Wow moving fast.

This is good other than it jumps between scenes. It would be better if you broke them up somehow.

I totally love this story =)
My favourite characters are probably Koda (for some strange reason) and Kate (coz she's epic ^^)
I also love every other character though.
Now i'm sorry if you've already answered this question somewhere and i've missed it but...why does Koda give Jamie money for the bet when it's going towards their going away? Coz I mean...they're going together so in the end Jamie's not earning any money at all and Koda could have put it in their savings.
Yeah so I hope that made sense.
Answer me at:
Because hippos're awesome =]

Toodles
Fatty

Sheesh Jamie and Bri are as bad as eachother.
I love this story and the characters =)
I'm gonna read Ez's stories after this seeing as everyone seems to love her (or him) ^^

Fatty