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The MacGregor 2008-10-11 ch 25,	abuseARE YOU DAMN SERIOUS?!?! IT'S OVER?!? not that the ending wasn't good, though a bit weak with all the happily-ever-after fuzz and goop, and that's just my personal preference of liking those bitter-sweet endings... not because of that, but because i love the characters (mostly kate :P) and the wwriting style and the plot... I LOVE THE DAMN STORY! WHY DOES EVERYTHING GOOD HAVE TO END??!? but as the author i believe you've already gotten about 660 other revies expressing the same idea. oh, and i know this is 3-ish years old, but you might want to go back and edit/spell check, you might find some things that you missed the first time (hinthint). BUT! i will say that i was slightly dissapointed in the ending. it could definitely been a lot worse, but i think it also could have been better, a lot more effectively written then the "happily ever after" stuff. I also think that unecessary characters like Aiden should be cut. his little bit in the story seemed out-of-the-blue and not reall as well tied in, maybe because his character wasn't developed, but also because that whole section with him could have been removed and no one would feel anything missing. (but maybe that's just me...) sorry if you read this review and think it's really jumbled and incoherent, it's currently 12:30AM in my little world. Thank you sincerely for writing this story. i loved it and i hope that you can/have already written one of the same caliber or higher :P ( a challenge). I really enjoyed reading. I may submit another review just for the purpose of analyzing character flaws, and plot issues... but i'm to tired tonight/this morning to gripe about tiny details that really don't mean anything x.x thanks again! The MacGregor
Razor to Rosary 2008-09-18 ch 25,	abuseHey there! I spent like a whole evening and the next day's afternoon reading your story! I just couldn't stop... It's awesome! I love your writing style. Plus it's nice to see an actual bad guy with actual feelings, instead of the love sick pseudo bad boy you usually see in stories. Love all the characters, but especially Jamie and Brian. ;) So A++ on character depiction! :D AND you made me discover the amazing song "Wonderwall"... I had never heard it but now I'm hooked! Keep up the great work!
Bloodfeeder94 2008-08-28 ch 25,	abuseOMG! I LOVE this story! Jamie, The old and the new, is my favorite character! I don't really like how they got together was because of a bet -And what exactly was the original bet anyways?- but I love the ending!! And and his best friend trying rape him was totally original. And you could kinda see the madness GROW in Koda. Like, maybe he was bad at the begginnig, but, by the end he was EVIL! But I absolutly love how you developed the character of Koda, and also of Jamie. My favorite would be how you changed Jamie so drastically in the last few chapters. And my favorite part in the whole thing would probably be the first kiss in the library. I don't exactly know why, hell knows they've had more romantic kisses, but i just like how you set that one up. It took me so long to read this one!! 4 hours to read 25 chapters! I'm losing my touch! Lee
kylesanchez 2008-08-16 ch 12,	abusei knew matt was gonna find out eventually...
kylesanchez 2008-08-16 ch 11,	abusemwahahaha! vengence! i love it!
xxxmusic is lifexxx 2008-08-09 ch 25,	abuseO.O I realize that the copywrite date for this is 2004, but it will not deter me from what must be said... That being: This was friggen AMAZING! I loved every second of this and it made me squeal, cry, laugh, smile, scream-out-loud, frown, growl at the screen and SO much more! There was so much emotion in this, it wasn't even funny! Okay, some parts were funny, but anyway! I LOVED all of your characters! Jamie with his level-headed, condescending, superior attitude! His constant agrumentative personality, and the way he'd never loved anyone, much less a boy before!! Brian! Oh how I love thee! Let me count the ways! He's just so... so... INNOCENT!! It's FRIGGEN COOT! The way he gets frustrated with the way people always walk all over him, but he cant seem to be able to do anything about it; the way he doesn't seem to realise exactly what's happening between he and Jamie until it's completely spelled out for him; the way he doesnt want to hurt anyone, so he goes as long as he can without telling anyone that he's gay. There's SO much awesome-ness in this, it's like if you could bottle it, you'd make MILLIONS!! Matt was a GREAT best friend character! The way he seemed just as level-headed and stand-offish as Jamie, yet he still hated his guts was really cool! And the whole side thing between he and Kate was really hecka coot, too! By the way, Kate was like, the bestestest female role in this thing, and I aplaud you for her character. Um... Yeah. Koda sucked. Hated him the whole time, I mean... Blonde dreadlocks? EW! shudders And the part where he tried to rape poor Jamie made me gasp in shock and fear! I was gripping the edges of my seat the whole time, I swear! I'm just glad he's gone! I loved the fact that there was some conflict between Brian and his mom about his coming out, because otherwise it would've been too perfect and such. I lurved the happy ending, because really, you didnt know if it was going to end happily or not! I hate it when you can tell like three chapters in advance how the story is going to end, and you actually did a fairly good ending. I really really liked it. I suppose I've read better - endings that is - but it wasn't bad. I thouroughly enjoyed this story, especially since I'm only fourteen and you werent very discriptive with the sex scenes. THANK YOU FOR THAT! There were so many things I loved about this, and I could list the ways for hours. But I dont want to bore you, so... I'll just go now. BYES! I hope to read more stories by you!
kylesanchez 2008-08-06 ch 6,	abusei now officially have jaime...
kylesanchez 2008-08-06 ch 5,	abusei really love this story :( and if you need help with any translation i would be more than happy to help :)
animebaby2000 2008-07-30 ch 25,	abusehey VERY good story , i really liked this story :) it was so cute and i kate koda :P what a jerk
girl-in-america 2008-06-19 ch 25,	abuseOK. Now I'm totally falbergasted (hehe) all the stories on your account are so great :) OK, I'm going to start babbling about how amazing all the stories are, so I'm going to stop myself now.
LizzleShizzle 2008-05-22 ch 25,	abuseI really loved this story :3 didnt want it to be over but i loved the end, its really sweet :D LOVE YA
Duuude 2008-05-12 ch 25,	abuseThat was so not pitiful.. it was cute. Haha... No wonder this story is in everyone's favourites, I never got around to reading it. It's awesome. It's not too angsty or lovey-dovey. It's in moderation. XD I was starting to think Koda was finally accepting everything and he attempted to RAPE Jamie?! Whoa. That came out of nowhere. I'm glad he left, Haha. Although, I'd love to see Brian strangle him. I like the way how things ended up. The only thing that confused me about this story was when you jumped to different parts or times, there was no seperation or anything. It was confusing, like Kate would be talking about whatever and then it would jump to Brians sulking around. Haha. You get used to it, but my brain's a little slow. Eheheh. Awesome story. It seems like every story on this account is awesome. Stupid Post-It Notes and that one in the future, whose title I forgot, are both REALLY REALLY good too. I'll be looking for updates from those two btw. Are they all written by different ppl? Confuses me. Anyway. Great job! LOVED IT!
AyumiYuy 2008-04-26 ch 24,	abuseOh, WOW. Is it wrong that I completely loved this chapter? ^^; First, I just loved that I was shocked - I never guessed that was going to happen. (Although it's not really inconsistent with Koda's character... I had just hoped after 4 years of friendship he felt more than lust for Jamie .. and that he wouldn't let his lust/anger/etc act that way...) But I also loved it because Jamie getting hurt like that seemed to balance out all of the hurt Brian's been through. I didn't like that Brian kept being hurt and Jamie was so unscathed. ^^:;; Now it's easier to love and forgive Jamie. And now I really -do- want them to be together! =) (I hope that doesn't sound too twisted... o.O) The one thing, though ... given the way society is (and how hard it is to prove, even when rape -actually- happens), it seems unlikely that the school administrators would have believed a guy tried to rape another guy. It's unfair, but I can see a lot of straight men just laughing the accusation off. So if I had been Koda, I wouldn't have been all that scared that they'd actually kick me out of the school. I'd figure the most they'd believe happened would be a beating.
AyumiYuy 2008-04-26 ch 23,	abuseOh yeah, I forgot to say how cute Koda was in the last chapter (although all the other reviewers said it for me, I think =P). Although seeing as you don't like him, maybe that wasn't intentional? And you say he's gonna be evil, so... Thank God! (Or in this case - Thank Ryan!) If Brian had just given in, I would have been kinda upset. Finally standing up for himself a little.
AyumiYuy 2008-04-26 ch 22,	abuseBrian's anger would be a little more gratifying if I didn't think it was going to be so short lived. =P He gets some balls, so Jamie says "I love you" and everything's okay? Maybe not. Must read on and find out...

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