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Duuude 2008-05-12 ch 25,	abuseThat was so not pitiful.. it was cute. Haha... No wonder this story is in everyone's favourites, I never got around to reading it. It's awesome. It's not too angsty or lovey-dovey. It's in moderation. XD I was starting to think Koda was finally accepting everything and he attempted to RAPE Jamie?! Whoa. That came out of nowhere. I'm glad he left, Haha. Although, I'd love to see Brian strangle him. I like the way how things ended up. The only thing that confused me about this story was when you jumped to different parts or times, there was no seperation or anything. It was confusing, like Kate would be talking about whatever and then it would jump to Brians sulking around. Haha. You get used to it, but my brain's a little slow. Eheheh. Awesome story. It seems like every story on this account is awesome. Stupid Post-It Notes and that one in the future, whose title I forgot, are both REALLY REALLY good too. I'll be looking for updates from those two btw. Are they all written by different ppl? Confuses me. Anyway. Great job! LOVED IT!
AyumiYuy 2008-04-26 ch 24,	abuseOh, WOW. Is it wrong that I completely loved this chapter? ^^; First, I just loved that I was shocked - I never guessed that was going to happen. (Although it's not really inconsistent with Koda's character... I had just hoped after 4 years of friendship he felt more than lust for Jamie .. and that he wouldn't let his lust/anger/etc act that way...) But I also loved it because Jamie getting hurt like that seemed to balance out all of the hurt Brian's been through. I didn't like that Brian kept being hurt and Jamie was so unscathed. ^^:;; Now it's easier to love and forgive Jamie. And now I really -do- want them to be together! =) (I hope that doesn't sound too twisted... o.O) The one thing, though ... given the way society is (and how hard it is to prove, even when rape -actually- happens), it seems unlikely that the school administrators would have believed a guy tried to rape another guy. It's unfair, but I can see a lot of straight men just laughing the accusation off. So if I had been Koda, I wouldn't have been all that scared that they'd actually kick me out of the school. I'd figure the most they'd believe happened would be a beating.
AyumiYuy 2008-04-26 ch 23,	abuseOh yeah, I forgot to say how cute Koda was in the last chapter (although all the other reviewers said it for me, I think =P). Although seeing as you don't like him, maybe that wasn't intentional? And you say he's gonna be evil, so... Thank God! (Or in this case - Thank Ryan!) If Brian had just given in, I would have been kinda upset. Finally standing up for himself a little.
AyumiYuy 2008-04-26 ch 22,	abuseBrian's anger would be a little more gratifying if I didn't think it was going to be so short lived. =P He gets some balls, so Jamie says "I love you" and everything's okay? Maybe not. Must read on and find out...
AyumiYuy 2008-04-26 ch 21,	abuseI love Kate, but ... her magic seduction plan is to dress like a slut? Seems kinda shallow for her character... o.O But okay. "I will never understand girls" / "I'll never have to" (Okay, so technically you said "I've never", but ...).
AyumiYuy 2008-04-26 ch 20,	abuseHave I said that I like Tebs yet? Eh, I guess I don't need to; I think I like all of the characters, even Koda. =P Brian's father taking his homosexuality so well was a very pleasant bit of irony. =) (Ironic because his father was previous this guy we'd never actually seen who Bri didn't get along with... and then their first interaction in the story goes so well, hah!) It's kinda odd to me that even though Matt is convinced Jamie doesn't love Brian (he said so in the last chapter), he encourages Brian to tell Jamie how he feels. And then he's all shocked when Jamie reacts the exact way he'd predicted a chapter before. =P But aside from that, I like the Matt chasing Jamie and stuff thing. It's nice. =) For the first time, I'm really pissed off. Why did Brian have to say it first?!?! Jamie was the one who set up the just-physical-no-emotion rules, so he should have put himself on the line for once and confessed he wanted it changed! But no. Gr. Stupid. The relationship doesn't seem even at all, with Brian always being the one on the line. At first, okay ... but this is ridiculous! Oh, well. =P At this point, there's not much else Brian can give, so Jamie will -have- to start giving too ... or there'd be no more movement. And now I feel sorry for Koda. =( I mean, I always kinda a little since he found out Jamie liked Brian (because I naively believe all people are innately good and try to empathize with them), but this last scene was a little heartbreaking. ^^;; (Wow, that was long. ^^;; Sorry... I wonder if you even read reviews for this story anymore, since you wrote it so long ago. ^^)
Ty Taco 2008-04-24 ch 25,	abuseThis is TOTALLY late...but this story was amazing. I read it all today and I LOVE it!! XOXOXO, Ty
AyumiYuy 2008-04-24 ch 16,	abuseSuch a serious chapter! It felt much more like "actual" literature and a little less like our giddy fictionpress fantasies. I really love your story!! =)
AyumiYuy 2008-04-23 ch 15,	abuseWoo! The Matt/Kate scene moves forward! (Well, in a backwards kind of way, but still!) I couldn't love Jamie more right now!! I really wanted to feel sorry for Koda, but ... ^^ Well, even if he kind of brought it on himself, I still feel a little sorry for him. ^^ =P
AyumiYuy 2008-04-23 ch 14,	abuseSo we finally learn what Jamie was willing to take the bet for.
AyumiYuy 2008-04-23 ch 13,	abuse"Jamie kissed his forehead and smiled. He wasn't surprised how easily it came to him. Brian made him smile a lot." What a sweet ending. ^^; Kinda a sweet chapter in general (despite the conflict with Matt, heh).
AyumiYuy 2008-04-23 ch 12,	abuseIt was unclear to me how much time had passed between the chapters ... they talked like they'd been shackin' up for a while, but it must have been a day or two since Sydney showed up early ... Maybe Koda -isn't- going to get all violent. =P Hm. The "He couldn’t care less about the moon." paragraph was beautiful. =)
AyumiYuy 2008-04-23 ch 11,	abuse"Jamie frowned. Brian would rather go out in the pouring rain than stay with him. He didn’t know why that thought hurt as much as it did." I don't know why, but that is my favorite Jamie moment so far! I felt so much sympathy for him. But his sex to get rid of you idea drives me a little nuts. I mean, I see how he would think that, but it drives me nuts!! =P Koda, Koda, Koda... he's gonna boil over...
AyumiYuy 2008-04-23 ch 10,	abuseWow, I was starting to think Brian didn't have it in him ... and now ... =)
AyumiYuy 2008-04-23 ch 8,	abuseAck! What is so important that Jamie would compromise himself for it? By that I mean, what makes Jamie so desperate he'll do another guy? Why didn't Koda just pay Jamie to sleep with -him- instead of Brian. =P Guess 'e's trying to warm him up. I really hope Matt and Katie get together. =) I think Matt likes Katie back. Hehe, he's so mad at Brian because he thinks she likes him... it seems that way, anyhoo.

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