|Reviews for Tired of Waiting|
| wo bu ai ni le 5/1/09 . chapter 1
Loved the strong language, great tone created. Short length but right to the point and stays in people's head. I think if "something that" was changed to "someone who" it would be more personal and emotional.
Overall loved it )
| painted eyes 7/6/08 . chapter 1
I like this as its just raw emotion, right in your face. The last line is very sad, though...in a good way, if you know what i mean?
Keep up the good work!
| breezy nostrils 2/4/06 . chapter 1
that happens me to me again. patience may be a virtue,but i don't have that. nice job with this!
| Manuel Fajar 5/29/05 . chapter 1
Corrected errant pen's errors,
But can these stilted thoughts be straight?
Though other domains may be right,
Where will heart's flutterings alight?
Thus life can bring us strange horrors,
Causing us huge immense tremors,
While laughing at all those rumors,
We sit and a cigar gay light.
p.s. I promise not to misspell is again until the very next time—*lol* m
| Cry Tears of Darkness 11/7/04 . chapter 1
i know that feeling! oh, my fav ive reviewed today! by far!