whoa...freaky...I must say, Ghosts aren't real...but this is definitely something to mess with a person's imagination! awesome job on it.

OMG...CHILLS RAN DOWN MY SPINE! This was ** incredible...I loved it so much...The ending gave me the chills...omg...so good

that is really good. i like how u expanded on that story u showed me u wrote awhile ago. kinda a secret windowish ending there. i like it.
-pugh

I love this, it's so very well done. It's not easily predictible as to what's going to happen next, which is hard to create in stories, but always a fun thing to have. Great work, keep writing.