Reviews for Upon A Time Undone

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Teldra 2008-10-13 ch 15,	abuseMore please? :)
immovinout 2008-08-30 ch 15,	abuseSo I'm gunna assume you've read Tithe, because, hey, it's an awesome book, yeah? Well this is better. Like a million times better. I would rather read this than Holly Black's stuff any day. Any day. I totally heart Bane by the way. :)
sylenctone 2008-07-20 ch 15,	abuseAck! I've spent the whole night reading this and now I'll be fretting for an indeterminate amount of time to fine out what happens to everyone! This story is thoroughly engrossing. And addictive, seeing as it is now dawn and I've been reading all night! I've really enjoyed immersing myself in this story you've woven. I shall now go off and fret about Bane and Aiden as well as what trouble Eleanor has gotten herself into with the mirrors, and all the mischief the rest of the lot are sure to get up to. Thank you for writing! jess
kuro-kaito 2008-06-18 ch 5,	abuseI feel the need to review this story I am quite fascinated with fairy tales and while others may just write using them as a base Yours I say hold a rein on their own. The twist, the use of fae magic, etc. Inspiring to say the least, just truly inspiring, and I do hope you continue with this story. Just one thing to add, as a critique I guess: I found that sometimes my eyes skim over paragraphs, but that was in the earlier chapters. Though I don't think you need to fix those much, once you read up to this chapter, you kinda get use to it. Well, have a good day,and I do look forward to reading your other stories.
Capricia 2008-06-08 ch 3,	abuseSo far awesome story. I can't wait to read more about Elenor and her family. As well as Ella and Tristan.
JYLG 2008-05-22 ch 15,	abuseI am seriously loving this fic, and oh wow, what a painful cliffhanger to leave it on. Looking forward to the rest of it. =)
Tler 2008-05-04 ch 15,	abuseOh, brilliant chapter. That kiss from Bane was so long in coming; the whole scene made me want to weep. Bane's hug...wibble There's so much good mystery in here the suspense is killing me. So cruel of you to throw in that bit about the mirrors while we're still scrabbling with all that's happening with Bane. I hope you won't keep us waiting too long for another chapter, though they're well worth the wait!
Evilgenius Koji 2008-04-26 ch 15,	abuseI like this. A lot. Quite possibly my favorite pairing is Bane and Aiden. They work well together, and Bane's snark is just epic win. xDD The scene in this chapter where Bane sees Aiden last is just very, very touching. I loved it completely. It was heartwrenching and bittersweet in a way. Aiden's trust that Bane will come back is at once both touching and gives you a view of his slight naivety. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
Mee-p 2008-03-29 ch 15, anon.	abuseE~ I'm so glad this has been updated and I read it again with glee! Seeing Aidan so deeply trusting with Bane makes me really happy and I HOPE you won't kill off Bane T_T! I want to see them have their own happy ending! And of course I'm hoping that Finbar and Eleanor get together soon, because they should G!
Catseye*Rose 2008-03-28 ch 15,	abuseYay! Update! XD Ah, somehow I remember most of what's going on...even though I haven't read it since June...or a month around that time... I don't remember who Declan is...but I remember I don't like him XP Therefore, I shall have to reread this story when I get the time. Ah, it's getting so dramatic! Madness! I hope Bane's alright...he's my favourite character... That was quite the rescue! And Aiden lives! Yay! Oh, and I like Cairon's serious/dark/scary side. A lot. I wonder what that mirror bit is about? Obviously it's not exactly a good thing...hmm... Well, I really liked it! XD Can't wait to find out what happens next! (It's all so exciting! XD)
Ekaphant 2008-03-27 ch 15, anon.	abuseOMG an update! You are me hero! ^^ It's great to know that Aiden's finally safe, but of course now I'm in suspense over what's going to happen to Bane. I love- this story so much. Keep it up!
Kilian 2008-03-27 ch 15,	abuseThis chapter was really full of tension. And now you have a whole lot of readers holding their breath thank to that cliff-hanger. Don't make us die of asphyxiation.
tomato-greens 2008-03-24 ch 15,	abuseOH MY GOD YOU ARE THE MOST AMAZING PERSON IN THE WHOLE INTERNET WORLD RIGHT NOW. SERIOUSLY. I will get back to you with some more coherency later, but for now, you have my undying pledge of loyalty and general awesomeness!
blueberrysundae 2008-03-24 ch 15,	abuseOMG. Oh my fing God. This is all I could ask for and more. It was totally worth the wait. I can't believe it! The "I trust him" and the kick * Cairon and the drama and the OMG. Sorry, I should probably review when I'm more coherent, but I am just utterly amazed and astounded. I
Annie 2008-03-23 ch 15, anon.	abuseHi. I've been lurking for a while, but it's about time I reviewed. I’ve always loved new takes on fairy tales, and you’ve done a particularly good job. The characters and relationships are very well developed and interesting, and your plots and universe are unique and fun. This is easily one of my favorite unprofessional stories I’ve read. I do have two negative things to say, though. First, to express my hope that you aren’t going to go the “I am your father” route with Bane and Skarrow. From what I’ve read, that would be predictable and boring. Second, try not to take 11 months to update next time please? It was a nice Easter present, though.

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