so many questions... i cannot answer. you're good at writing poetry. keep it up =0)

So true. I love this. Awesome

ah first i want to say thanks for your review! was much appriciated! and yes, one review does make a difference to me. i love getting reviews, especially when someone takes the time to read and review. some ppl just read and blah! thats it. but yeah. perhaps i do get tons of reviews, but they all say the same thing and half are done just so ill review back, lol. its a give and take thing, lol! anyways, i think its good how you use questions in your poem that most people often dont sit there and think about and that you try to explore than answers as well. nice poem! and thanks again for your review, sorry it took so long to get back to ya.

I like the rhythm an energy in this. Even though I didn't particaurly like the theme. Just something about gold (=greed) being assosiated with angels (=purity) that didn't seem right. Good work though.
Stones decay, words last
Nick

i liked it oh and thanxs for my reviews!

That's beautiful. You can feel the intensity. I'm putting it in my favourites.