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| puppy dog eyes 2007-01-23 ch 12,  | abuseThis is a really good story and I would have reviewed for every chapter if I wasn't so lazy. Anyway, I like how the story is progressing and how Nikolai doesn't gain his whole memory back all at one time, but things trigger his memory. It makes it seem more realistic. Please update soon. I want to see how Nikolai reacts when he finds out the reason he left in the first place. |
| Kitsye 2005-12-07 ch 12, | abusepretty please add more! have been away from the site for a little while and have only just come back to look up all the stories i liked through the beginning of the year. your is one of them, but you haven't added anything since i last read, so i ask please add more! slight question: how is it that Nikolai can bite Adam without Adam becoming a werewolf like him? this is a confusing aspect of the story which i don't fully understand... chaos (email: chaos_star@hotmail.co.uk) |
| SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-06-14 ch 12, | abuseI suck, don't I? SO SORRY it took me this long to get to. Forgive me? You know I freaking loved it. AHAHAHA at them getting kind of caught. Glad they all sort of worked it out. Much happiness here. I hope you continue soon. *MUCH LOVE* |
| Siamh 2005-06-08 ch 12, | abuse*smirks* I liked this chapter. Thank you for updating! But for all I know you could have updated a few days ago and i am now royally late in giving my thanks... I haven't been on the computer in a while so ya. Anwyay! on a happier note thank you so much for updating I was starting to think that you gave up on this story! Happy that you proved me wrong. |
| nina-101 2005-06-02 ch 12, | abuseGreat chapter!Update soon! |
| nina-101 2005-03-02 ch 11, | abuseUpdate soon! |
| Wolfie Star26 2005-03-02 ch 11, | abuseboy is Toby going to get a big surprise when he "confronts" Adam. hehe, I'm glad Nikolai and adam made up, but i think it was kinda rushed. Hehe. I loved it, update soon. |
| SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-03-01 ch 11, | abuseHmm. Aren't Toby and Adam friends? Toby is acting so...evil-ish, in a sense, I think. Myabe it's my poor attention skills and I've missed something important. Oh well. Was a really good chapter. Should I not find it funny that he was ** about having sex? Hehehe. Odd man. Continue soon, k? |
| Rappleart 2005-03-01 ch 11, | abuseyay! you updated! im so happy! and i like the chappie and eagerly await the next |
| Walter Dash 2005-03-01 ch 10, | abuseI liked everything except for the: (Deleted bit.) |
| Damian 2005-02-24 ch 10, | abuseArgh! Did you have to stop right here? More, more, more! Okay, now that that's off my chest, this is wonderful so far and I want an Adam of my own... ah well. Another chapter soon would be incredible, nudge nudge wink wink. I really like your writing--it's very descriptive and your characters are very real. Keep up the good work! |
| Siamh 2005-02-15 ch 10, | abuseWOW! This story is so good! I wonder why you don't have more reviews? Honestly this is really good! In fact it's going in my Favorites! I hope you update soon! Cause you have a new reviewer that's hooked on your lovery story! Oh and does Adam have wings? It's just that you never mentioned them so I'm wondering if he has any. |
| Wolfie Star26 2005-02-07 ch 10, | abuseaww, this is nice so far i really like it and i cant wait for more, please update soon. |
| lamia animus 2005-02-06 ch 10, | abusethat was very nice and fuzzy but next chapter i require answers about nikolai's memory and some plot twists please. and an extra large order of fries. thank you! ~where do they make balloons?~ -lamia |
| Rappleart 2005-02-06 ch 10, | abusewo! another good chappie, im really sry, but this review will b short seeing as i sprained my wrost which makes it hard to type, but i love the story, keep goin, and i want my cookie dough! lol |