I liked this. It was a sweet ending. I wasn't expecting it.

I suppose the end of this chapter is a bit weak, but I still love you and Craig and Drew. And anyway, the chapter as a whole was great. I was really thinking that either Drew had somehow cheated on Craig, which is pretty unfathomable or Drew had told his partents that he was dating Craig and all hell was gonna break loose. So, the suicide bit was a surprise and I like surpries.

Oh, I feel very sad right now. What did Drew do? I don't even want to know, but I'm a masochist, so I guess I'll go ahead and read the next chapter.

That was creepy and sexy at the same time. I love it.

Oh. My. God.

So

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Me

Good.




But seriously. AMAZING.

Well... guess which story I decided to try my hand at first? It's on my hellcat journal if you want to take a peek at the very first preliminary sketch!

(Do I even need to go on about how great this stroy is? Like, really? It's great. Ha, so articulate am I!)

well i am completely lost for wat you gonna write...

hello

** yea

** ** ** DAMN ** HELL BLOODY HELL! wow that was...interesting

i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ update soon

...Craig swung the computer chair out from the desk (it was an office chair on three casters) and pulled Nikki down to sit on his lap when he came close enough, kissing him companionably.

“I was talking to Stee… he knows about us.”

Nikki sat up from his warm sleepiness and his cuddling against Craig’s chest. “What?!” he asked in mild panic.

Craig grabbed Nikki’s hands to pull him back down to rest against him again. He was chilly and Nikki was warming him up nicely. “Don’t worry, he’s cool with it.”...

...Now whhy does it say Nikki? Lmfao.

all I can say, WOW! please write more, soon.

That was good. I think you should explain why drew was so upset more and then maybe in a later ch. throw in some jealousy right now everything is so fine and dandy there really isn't any external conflict.

Sex! Sex! Sex!

...*Coughs* Yeah, that's about as constructive as I get.