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| SnoWhiteQueen 2005-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseI love the last two lines. |
| Intrepid 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseWonderful personification of the circles. My favorite line: "Circulated the light" |
| a duel of pens 111 2004-11-29 ch 1, | abuseive read that before. i always like ti. u write ahort poems, but they are alwasy good. and how do you get your poems singel spaced? it always double spaces mine. gr... haha, i laiuught at "tim" in your other poem. he doesnt know how true that is...*giggle* the sexy butterfly! |
| sirius chatham 2004-11-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was amazing. Says so much in so few words. Really really good concept, and good job executing the idea. I really like this poem. Says a lot. Sirius Chatham ps r/r my stuff too |