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| Samana Cay 2007-12-06 ch 2, | abusethis is pretty interesting. i think you should continue it.. even though its been QUITE some time haha. but hey, i understand writers block. for seriously though - for the one chapter and song prologue, it sounds really spiffy |
| Instant Ninja 2005-06-01 ch 2, | abusehi! ...did you end this...? aw... I like the idea! It's rather original! ...poor Ned... aw... ...um, see ya around, chica! -INK- |
| Rising Falcon 2005-01-21 ch 2, | abuseA guy doing ballet?! Now that's something I don't see everyday. Hmm..Mao Tze Tung was I think the communist leader in China some decades ago. Hey can you RnR my story? I think I need help |
| DaDel Amor 2005-01-03 ch 2, | abuseErm, Nice Start. Not really much to review on but seems to be following the revisions you made on the song. |
| lee 2004-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, could you be any less original, that is crap |
| blond1w/whiskey 2004-11-24 ch 2, | abusethis story looks interesting, keep going |
| B.R.35 2004-11-22 ch 2, | abuseI love Ned! He sounds so nice. I like the idea! Please write more! |
| captainr3tardo 2004-11-14 ch 2, anon. | abusewow..good start..like your descriptions |
| Endowment's Seraph 2004-11-14 ch 2, | abuseI didn't think you'd be literal in the "he did ballet" but I like it. it's deep. I can't wait to read more ~Mel |
| Kaptain K 2004-11-14 ch 2, | abuseHm, I like the twist, the boy is the goody two-shoes dancer instead of the girl. Does Ned have a crush on Rayne? No guy I know would actually apologize for getting a girl in trouble, he's so nice. I hope you update all your stories soon! ~Kaptain K~ PS. please R&R my stories. |
| rock 'n' roll junkie 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abuseNice start. Looking forward to the first real chappie! |
| Endowment's Seraph 2004-11-08 ch 1, | abusecleaver. interesting twist. hmm. can't wait for you to start the story, sounds promising ~Mel |