You are a tenshi of words, ange. Truly your name fits you, and out of all authors I have read with the exception of a few. I like you best.
Lots of Love,
Emi

This was really sweet and I like how you turned a piece of history into such a feeling, romantic one-shot. Haha I'm a sucker for fluff! =D

Though I do have a couple misunderstanding I'd like to help clear up. ^_^ See, a muslim would never be with a man out of wedlock. Also, polygamy is not allowed in Islam (muslim men can't marry more than one wife at a time). Yes the prophet did this but not for sex as other men do it these days. Also, with the harem it was part of the Ottoman Empire, too, but the harem was not used for the non-existant multiple wives (they didn't do polygamy either, they were muslims). These harems/rooms/areas were used to select only the best girls or women out of society and teach them royalty. Imagine if this was done out in the open, if extra care wasn't taken to conceal such honourable things- everyone would have wanted to be a part of it or, people would have even started discriminating each other.
I realise that you probably don't believe me but please know that this is the truth. I am a muslim and a turk. I know my rules, my history. ^_^

But as I said, I really did like this story apart from the misunderstandings. Quite sweet and heart-palpatating, if you know what I mean *winks*

-admirer-of-your-fic

oh my gosh i love it!! keep writing!

That's so cute.

Because I like you best.

:] made me smile.

this is such a great one-shot story sweet and simple but seems to have a nice little something to it that i cant really describe. as always great job!

it was a lovely piece. i enjoyed it thoroughly. good luck on ur other stories, too.

cute

Hmm... an interesting bite of literature. You seem to have a natural sense of this time period. At times the flow seemed rather rough, but the ending was quite lovely. The rest of your stories seemed rather intriguing, I expect to be reading them sometime soon. ~ Tschüs

this is the first of your stories that i have read and i must say, i really enjoyed it. It was wonderfully written, and i love reading stories about historic figures, it doesn't matter if they're accurate or not. It was a perfect one-shot. There are so many that i read where they never seem to have a satisfying ending, unless they're so horrible you just want it to end, in which case it doesn'y end soon enough. But enjoyed it, yet was satisfied enough where i needed no more, i was happy to leave it as it was. I must say, this is one of the few stories i've read where i dont have any criticism at all, not even in my head. Really good job.

aw...that's so sweet! well, that's about all i can describe it as. Maybe you should do more one-shots about leaders and lovers. how's that for a title, eh? it would be cool for something like George Washington and someone...

I Love it.

o I liked this a lot!

Allah? You have someone mentioning "Allah" almost a thousand years before the birth of the prophet Mohammed and the beginning of Islam in the 7th century AD? Sure, the name "Allah" for God was used before Mohammed's birth by Arab Christians, but there is absolutely no way that someone would have been using that term in the 4th century BC. If your main character is Arab, then she would probably worship a goddess named Allat. But the Persians of this time period were Zoroastrians, and would be until the Islamic conquest. This isn't just a trivial matter of "inaccuracy"; it's a matter of caring enough about your story and subject matter to do some basic research. After all, you wouldn't make Alexander a Christian, would you?

Is this story finish?? This is really good. I hope it's not the end of it. You havent updated this story for so long! UPDATE, well, if it's not finished yet.. :)

ok, so maybe you were only slightly historically accurate. whatever. good story nonetheless.