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| Silver 2007-07-29 ch 1, | Wow. Impressive. I especially liked the ending. It was completely unexpected, yet fitting, right. The denial and the final undeniable truth that settled with dawning horror... Beautiful. Just as Nikolai's love for his brother. All consuming, to the point where he can't allow, can't stand any more wrongs being done against his brother, who deserves so much more. Deserves no pain. I apologise for rambling, I just loved this story that much. I'm liking you more and more. |
| wodneythewat 2005-09-10 ch 1, | wow. i dont normally like reading stuff about incest/bi, but this is good. its confusing, but it is an awesomely good piece of writing. does that even make sense? i think your english teacher might love your writing but hate the confusion that comes with it. |
| inthemiddle 2005-09-08 ch 1, | I like this, by the way. but the prompt for the paper was to take a photograph (I took one of my boyfriend) and expand on it any way we chose. I kind of took a lot of liberties with it, but I think it's okay. as for the "We woulds," I did it deliberately for emphasis, but if you think it stiffles the piece, I can certainly edit. thanks SO much for your feedback! |
| Insane Maniac 2005-09-05 ch 1, | Wow, creepy plus satisfying. I love it! |